{"id":743,"date":"2015-04-26T19:44:27","date_gmt":"2015-04-27T02:44:27","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/blogs.evergreen.edu\/losttimecheryl\/?p=107"},"modified":"2015-04-26T19:44:27","modified_gmt":"2015-04-27T02:44:27","slug":"a-note-for-my-fellow-student-readers","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/sites.evergreen.edu\/losttime\/a-note-for-my-fellow-student-readers\/","title":{"rendered":"A note for my fellow student readers"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Hi Everyone,<\/p>\n<p>I wanted to let everyone know that I would love to receive peer feedback for any of my papers, or journal entries.<\/p>\n<p>Obtaining a response from my usual reader, is not possible with\u00a0the writings in this program. They are too personal and it upsets him greatly.<\/p>\n<p>So, If you have time, even a few minutes, I would love to know-\u00a0 Is what I wrote at all interesting?\u00a0 Does it make sense? Flow?\u00a0 Missing important information? Too much detail included? Any other suggestions?<\/p>\n<p>I understand that my subject matter my be uncomfortable for some people, but I wonder if these stories are ones that are interesting and clear.\u00a0 Are they worth writing?<\/p>\n<p>Fine detailed proofreading is not needed. I know that there are some errors and will be correcting them. I&#8217;m more interested in your response to the writing.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Thank You<\/p>\n<p>Cheryl Kokolani<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Hi Everyone, I wanted to let everyone know that I would love to receive peer feedback for any of my papers, or journal entries. Obtaining a response from my usual reader, is not possible with&nbsp;the writings in this program. They&#8230; <a href=\"http:\/\/blogs.evergreen.edu\/losttimecheryl\/a-note-for-my-fellow-student-readers\/\">Continue Reading &rarr;<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1112,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_mi_skip_tracking":false},"categories":[10],"tags":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.evergreen.edu\/losttime\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/743"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.evergreen.edu\/losttime\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.evergreen.edu\/losttime\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/sites.evergreen.edu\/losttime\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1112"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/sites.evergreen.edu\/losttime\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=743"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/sites.evergreen.edu\/losttime\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/743\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/sites.evergreen.edu\/losttime\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=743"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/sites.evergreen.edu\/losttime\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=743"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/sites.evergreen.edu\/losttime\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=743"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}