Hi Everyone,

I wanted to let everyone know that I would love to receive peer feedback for any of my papers, or journal entries.

Obtaining a response from my usual reader, is not possible with the writings in this program. They are too personal and it upsets him greatly.

So, If you have time, even a few minutes, I would love to know-  Is what I wrote at all interesting?  Does it make sense? Flow?  Missing important information? Too much detail included? Any other suggestions?

I understand that my subject matter my be uncomfortable for some people, but I wonder if these stories are ones that are interesting and clear.  Are they worth writing?

Fine detailed proofreading is not needed. I know that there are some errors and will be correcting them. I’m more interested in your response to the writing.

Thank You

Cheryl Kokolani